Thursday, February 9, 2012

Dear Dr. Shelly,

I understand the whole facts and interpretation concept very well.
Incorporating facts and intepretations throughout my life is a step up
for me in becoming a better writer. I was able to give enough details
to the fullest extent in my narrative essay in everything that occured
that night. I know I succeeded in making my essay vivid for readers
by providing imagery to back up what I've said.I incorporated facts
as I gave detailed descriptions on each thing that occured. The facts
helped bring my essay to life as I explained the scenarios. Getting feedback
helped me a lot with my essay because I feel more comfortable with someone
my own age that can relate to certain problems I've gone through. She scrutinized
errors that I did not see and criticized my work to a certain extent that would
benefit me in my writing.

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